I finished the dishes and now am impatiently waiting for chapter 2! Very compelling! A couple of minor nits (I'm a standards editor): ...Pashtun, some were even. ?? some were even what?
and, handed off by the ISI, -> handed off by ISI. This is great!
omg how exciting, is this novel going to be fed to us chapter by chapter, week to week? Yessss I am all for it.
I finished the dishes and now am impatiently waiting for chapter 2! Very compelling! A couple of minor nits (I'm a standards editor): ...Pashtun, some were even. ?? some were even what?
and, handed off by the ISI, -> handed off by ISI. This is great!
In your story, you have made a mistake. The doctor who led the Americans to Osama Bin Laden was Shakil Afridi (not Shahid Afridi). Please correct it.
Oh dear I used to think like that