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Rafia Zakaria's avatar

Her story is a very complicated one so I am trying to tell it in a way that readers will understand and be interested in. I got two paid subscriptions last night so I am going to be able to keep the next installment free which is fantastic!

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Patrick Durusau's avatar

I wonder if "prologue" following Chapter 1 is confusing (it was to me). Perhaps "Chapter 2 - Karachi, Pakistan. March 30th 2003" would clue readers in that they are getting the back story to go with chapter 1? A minor detail in a very gripping account!

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